Beat 'n' Shake

Beat 'n' Shake Dance Club

THE GAME SCRIPT

Vinus, Home of the Best Dance Clubs in this side of the Quadrant. Don't enter the Dance Club if you're already been through the Sewer Rats mission or people are gonna start complaining of the bad smell. Don't dance badly. If you get too many complaints. for doing the Axel, they may throw you off the stage to join the pile of other droids down in the sewers. If storm steps into the club, all the people make fun of his ridiculous uniform. The people of Vinus are often rude and ill mannered. When you can dance better, you won't get so many complaints.

Watch out for the MILLION RATS also lurking around down in the vast underground sewer systems of the city that exist just under Vinus. Also watch out for Jellies. or Flans. This is NOT a friendly place. not with a MILLION rats also chasing you through the sewer tunnels of the city.

GAME SCRIPT: This Game Script uses Spin slots for constructing dialog responses and also uses spin slots to Swap rooms around with different game characters depending also on storyline events. The dialog also uses Sub Branches.

Game Choices: Back To Vinus City
Systems List
Something is bothering Storm)
Leave Nightclub
Continue

Commander: Oh, This is a nice tune they are playing. Commander: You thank me darlin. Commander: You give me dues, he, he, oh oh oh.

Loana: This is a dance club Commander, not a singing contest.

14 A.I Responses (Chosen by the Computer only 1 line is displayed in the actual game dialog.)

Loana: They're playing quite a groovy tune tonight.
Loana: Good music they're playing here tonight.
Loana: I haven't been back to Beat 'n' Shake for a while.
Loana: Well This place bring back memories.
Loana: Looks like everybody is having a good time as usual.

Loana: The one thing I like about this place is that nothing changes around here.
Loana: This Place is Always busy.

Loana: So I hear you're one of the Galaxy's worst dancers Axel. This I have to see.

Loana: Gosh I like this music, Arian must've found some new material. on Solus Minor when she took the girls there recently.

Loana: Well At least nobody has been shot down in here yet but it does
happen on Vinus.

Loana: Looks peaceful enough for now. But its not always so peaceful on
Vinus, not even in the clubs. Sometimes there are fights that break
out. But I can take care of myself.

Loana: At last I can rest and relax.
Loana: I don't want to stay here for too long.

Loana: I wonder how the dancers are doing in their competitions this year.

A) If The Commander Has The Default Dance Move He will say this:

Commander: I haven't done the Axel in a while. The night is young, I need to warm up.

B) If The Commander has upgraded his dance move he will say this:

Commander: I haven't done the Funkslide in a while. The night is young, I need to warm up. (Funkslide dialog not scripted all in yet)

If The Commander only has got the Dreaded Axel move:

4 A.I Responses back from Storm:

Storm: Oh no. I should not have come here. Reminder note to self: Don't bring Axel to any dance clubs.

Storm: No, No, No. Don't do that.
Storm: Er. I think we should be going now.
Storm: Please, Do anything else but not that.

9 A.I Responses back from the Commander

Commander: I'm in the mood for a little dancing now.
Storm: Oh no, please don't do the Axel.

Commander: I want to do some dancing
Commander: Let's dance
Commander: Oh I like this tune, This music moves me
Commander: This tune is infectious

Commander: I'm going to do the Axel.
   Storm: Commander, If I was you, I wish you wouldn't do that.

Commander: Let's get out there on the dance floor and show
them what we got.

     Storm: Damm.

Commander: I'm in a good mood and feel like taking a dance

Loana: What the hell is the Axel? Is that some kind of new move?

Storm: That you don't want to know, its the worse dance ever.

Loana: Oh Really? Now This I gotta see.

Storm: You don't want to, believe me. it's bad.

At this point in the script, if the Party has already been through the Sewer Rat Mission these are the A.I responses from the people in the dance club 1 line shows up in dialog from the list.

Passerby: Oooh pweewwwh what is that horrible smell. You guys need to wash that off.
Passerby: Oh God what is that awful stench. && sound play Passerby8.wav && bg sleep 10100
Passerby: Urgghh Rughh I'm dying, oh that horrible smell it's coming from him and him and you. && Passerby: Ahh what a nice day it is. POWHHS arghhh. Oh you people stink, where have you been ? && Passerby: Ooh, what a stink, where is that bad smell coming from? && sound play Passerby5.wav && Passerby: You need to do something about that bad awful smell. && sound play Passerby6.wav && bg
Passerby: Go have a bath, you people smell terrible, what have you been in, down in the sewer? &&

Passerby: You guys look a wreck, where have you been, oh that horrible smell. Phew. Go to the bathroom and take a shower.

Passerby: Urgh, smells like something bad has gone rotten in here, its coming from you guys.
Passerby: Urgh stay away from the sewers next time.
Passerby: Stop Polluting our nice clean air.

Commander: What do you mean we smell terrible?

Loana: Haven't you forgotten silly, we were recently down in the sewer with all those horribile rats remember. We need to find a place to wash this mess off our uniforms. We can't stay in the club looking and smelling like this.

Commander: Oh, yes I had almost forgot about that. I'm not feeling so happy now. Wheres my happy pill, Think happy thoughts, oh dammit its no use, we smell absolutely awful.

Commander: boo.. .boo....boom, boom. booom boo...booo hoo (music beat)

Loana: Oh this is awful to watch. Tell him to stop. I've seen enough. He needs lessons.

4 A.I Responses from Storm

Storm: What are you talking about, that don't make any sense to me at all.
Storm: Boo, Boom, Boo? What nonsense are you babbling about.
Storm: You're not making any sense.
Storm: Boom, Boom, Boom?.. Blargh, what kind of nonsense is that?

Commander: Boom Boom Boom, the beat of the music I'm listening to.

Storm: Oh.. You are weird.

Loana: Stop,this Axel move please. This is now starting to embarass me.

Rex: What is this music, I've never heard this style before, we don't have music like this on our world. it's pretty catchy. Boom... Boom... Booom. Hey I kinna like it.

Storm: Oh no, not you as well.

Loana: I think you're all weird.

Storm: She can be quite obnoxious in the things she says.

Commander: Well whatever it is, it is working.

Loana: You guys are unbelievable.

Storm: We try.

Loana: The Both of you can stop, I've seen enough. the only thing that's going to be popular in this club with that awful move is alot of booing to throw you off the stage.

Storm: Commander, Look down over here, I see a couple of broken droids below the stage. She's not kidding. did they just fall off or were they thrown off?

Loana: Yeah, Those were the rejects I had from last week. The people booed them but Droids they would not stop, faulty programming I guess, so they were thrown off the stage. Those droids used to be my students. But they flunked their lessons, so on the scrapheap with the other droids they go. Hey well if you have a problem with that, go and talk to Arian the owner.

Commander: But I haven't even gotten to the good part yet.

Storm: There is no good part Commander.

Loana: Commander, your current skill set is way too low, if you were to dance here with that awful Axel move, you would get thrown off the stage and join with the other rejects when Arian just pulls the lever after shes had enough. But if you were to come to me for some lessons later on and improve then you might be allowed to dance here. Arian is on the upper floor if you want to talk to her.

Go upstairs to see Arian
Stay and ask Loana for a dance
Go down to lower Part of the Club

Rex: I think it is unique, different, would make a good greeting on our world.

Storm: You got to be crazy Rex. The Axel is not good to share with your people. It needs to be shot out of its misery..

Commander: Loana and come join us on the stage and let's all do the axel.

Loana: Commander, did you not see what happened to the other rejects? The people around here take their dancing seriously.

More Attacking Comments coming from the rude people of Vinus who randomly walk past the party. If you have done the Sewer Rat Mission BEFORE stepping into the Night Club.

Rude Person #1: Phew Yew, what is that awful smell, did the bathroom toilet overflow?.
Rude Person #2: There is an awful smell coming from around here.

Rude Person #3: Pardon, me I don't mean to be rude, but of course I will be, you
guys stink, go have a wash.

Rude Person #4: Phew, hey guys get a load of this, there is a revolting smell and its coming from these three here.

Rude Person #5: Oh yuck, who left something rotten in here.
Rude Person #6: I think I'm going to be sick, what is smelling so bad in here.
Rude Person #1: I can't stand the smell any longer, I'm outta here.
Rude Person #1: You need to get rid of that smell or leave the premesis.
Rude Person #2: It smells like the sewer is in here.
Rude Person #4: Yuck, you guys really stink, what a mess you are, you need to go
get rid of the smell out of those clothes.

Rude Person #5: You can't stay in the club smelling like that, where have you
been down with all the sewer rats?

Rude Person #7: That smell, oh that horrible smell.
Rude Person #8: Who is smelling so bad in here, it smells like sewer rats.
Rude Person #4: I'm outta Here, someone needs to do something about that smell.
Rude Person #2: I'm not staying here, Managment needs to do something about this.

Game Choice: (If not been through the Sewer Mission before entering Night Club this appears.)

Ask Loana for a dance anyway.

Storm: Commander, People are noticing we don't smell so good after coming out of the sewers.

Commander: Yes, you're right, we don't smell so hot after going through all those rats.

Loana: Oh How Embarassing this is. Get to the bathroom quick and get rid of this stench.

Game Choice:

Enter Bathroom to wash off Sewer Stench

Loana: I am so relieved to have all that slime and stench finally all removed from my hair and cloes at last. What a relief.

Commander: I feel so much more fresher and cleaner now.

Loana: Oh thank the gods for that. I feel so much better now.

Storm: Well at least we are not smelling so bad now. Our Reputation is safe.

Loana: Well.. Whoopee for you.

If Choice B (Ask Loana for a Dance is Chosen) This script Pops Up

Loana: But you can't dance Commander. Well, Not yet anyway.
Loana: With Rex watching? You got to be joking.

(If Party been through Sewer Rat Mission)

Alien Girl #1: I'm loving this new tune they are playing here, Want do. Urgh, Oh Phew, what is that awful horrible smell. I'm not dancing with you, Go take a bath.

Game Choice:

Storm: Take it now Commander, The Alien girl won't dance with
Just Ignore the request

3 A.I Resposes from Alien Girl #1 to the Commander

Alien girl #1 You must be new here, I'm loving this tune wanna dance?
Alien Girl #1 Wow I like this funky tune. Want to dance?
Alien Girl #1 Nice music, care to dance?

Loana: Are you kidding me, Back off Dollface, he is my dance partner tonight.

Alien Girl #1: Sorry to intrude Miss Shields. You are welcome to do what you want on the dancefloor.

Rex: Why hello there.

Alien Girl #1: I'm fine thanks. So are you from Hercai?

Rex: I'm from the Titan Suns which is near the Hercai system.

Alien Girl #1: Never heard of it, oh well see ya (starts to walk away)

Humph. That was a little rude.

Storm: Oh don't feel too bad Rex, she's not from your world. She's not even from this expanse.

Alien Girl #1: (turns around) Yeah That's right, you must be new
around here. I'm from Aluria.

Rex: Aluria? Never heard of the place.

lien Girl #1: Aluria, don't you know?, its near the Twelve Cluster Nebula in the Hydranse Expanse in the Delta Quadrant.

Titans Suns Rex: (scratches head) Sorry, Never heard of it.

Alien Girl #1: Humph. Indeed. (walks off)

Storm: Heh Heh Hahaha. That was funny.

Rex: I didn't think it was, she was rude to me.

Storm: Oh you have a lot to learn Rex. She's a distant relative of Vinus, the people on Vinus are always rude.

Rex: Oh, I see, what a weird wacky world.

Loana: My World Weird and Wacky? Don't push it buster.

Rex: What a strange species she is. I see what you mean by rude and obnoxious.

Storm: Heh heh heh. You're learning.

Commander: So Loana do you want to have a dance with me? (If the first dance invitation was rejected he will ask once more).

Game Choices:

Yes please.
No thanks
Talk to Storm.

10 A.I Responses Rejections from Loanna to the Commander:

Loana: You are in bad need of dance therapy. You should take my new course, Get Right Quick Dance Steps

Loana: Maybe later.
Loana: Not this time. Your dancing is still awful.

Loana: Well Since you saved my life from those thugs, I will think
about it.

Loana: I'm not in the mood right now, maybe later.
Loana: Sorry, maybe next time.
Loana: Alright Commander, I hope you can keep up with me.
Loana: I don't want to dance with Rex watching me.
Loana: Are you kidding me after just insulting me saying i'm
obnoxious and wacky?
Loana: Sorry, but you're not good enough to dance with me.

IF SHE ACCEPTS:

Loana: Oh All right, Come on, let's go. Let's see just how bad you really are. (Grabs Commander. The commander is dragged onto the dance floor. You start dancing on the dance floor doing the Axel and
look pretty stupid.)

Loana: Good God man, what the hell do you call that move? You dance
like a dead fish, that's not a dance you're hardly moving, that's a joke.
How painful for me to watch.

Commander: I thought I was moving. I call it the Axel shuffle.

Loana: Is that all you can do, just turn once around on the floor
and do a tiny little shuffle?

Commander: Well I don't know of anything else.

Loana: Only just 1 move is all that you know?, you must be kidding
me, oh well have to start from somewhere I guess.

Commander: I wasn't kidding you.

Loana: You're way too stiff and rigid looking, just relax
and follow my lead. Gee you don't even know how to swing properly.

Storm: Well commander, I don't know about you, (Commander is
still struggling to keep up with Loana's steps, but she has the moves
and is a very good dancer indeed.

Commander: Storm, Help me.

Storm: You two Have fun Oh, and one more thing, Commander.

Commander: What.

Storm: Do me a favour and Learn some new Dance moves from Loana and get rid of that awful move you call the Axel.

Cutscene of the two dancing on the stage is all over, the people clap, they enjoy the little show Loana puts on. They think you're good with her. In fact you're only good with Shields, because she
knows how to dance but you don't.

Storm: Your dancing still sucks Commander. But she's introducing you to some new moves so we should see an improvement in you, eventually.you will soon see the errors of your ways.

Game Choices:

Do you know much about this place?
Have a drink
Count me in gentleman I'll join you. (Loana)
Talk to Red Alien sitting at the bar.